[Centre] Centre:new draft

Wed Sep 7 14:07:47 CEST 2011

Thanks Volker

I'll see what I can do, juggling the word counts (I'm on exactly 1000
words in one section, and only ten or so under in others

S

On 07/09/2011 12:49, "Volker Grassmuck" <vgrass at rz.hu-berlin.de> wrote:

>Dear all, 
>
>some more small edits in the attached version. And an idea that I had
>brought up a while ago: I have the feeling that the 7 programmatic points
>do not belong under "Demonstration of need² but rather under "Key
>features², while a paragraph like "We will undertake case studies ... in
>various sectors...² addresses issues asked for under "Demonstration of
>need².
>
>For filling in the distinctiveness of our Centre that is asked for there,
>I would like to emphasize Ed/Sally Jane¹s point: "the broader thrust
>funders will expect from the SINGLE copyright centre they'll select, ...
>a credible one-stop-shop for copyright expertise if we're seen as a
>bridge, rather than an island."
>
>Success for the final round of drafting.
>
>Best,
>Volker
>