Good comments, Tom. Ingeborg, Sanne, and Felix - could you (whoever is working on the draft right now) integrate Tom's comments into your version? Thanks. Martin Anfang der weitergeleiteten E-Mail:

Von: Tom Oda <[email protected]> Datum: 3. April 2012 04:36:03 MESZ An: Martin Köchy <[email protected]> Betreff: Comments on the COCOS draft (Tom Oda)

Hi Martin,

I'm sorry that I took long time to get back to you. Here I'm sending a doc with my comments. Please see the attached. I've worked on the doc sent by Philippe, so recent corrections are not included there. I was suffering from German spell check. You might find English-German mixed language in my comments...

Thanks, Tom

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